Thread:KinguvX/@comment-26462356-20160203221108

KinguvX:

Hi old friend, haven't touched base with you in a while. Hope everything is going well.

I'd like to ask your opinion of two pieces I wrote recently:

User blog:Ronaldo Smith/The Return 2: The Trap This is a fast paced adventure.

User blog:Ronaldo Smith/Meeting Peridot Part II This is a 'feels'.

For some reason I haven't gotten any comments on them, and I would really like to know what people do/don't like about them to help me decide what to write in the future.

I respect your opinion, so, if you have the time and are interested could you please leave a comment on either or both of them?

Thanks

Ronaldo Smith 