Thread:MizukageMoonstone/@comment-5524828-20170202234630

Hello Mizukage!

I was wondering, since "Pearl/History" is currently a major stub with gigantic holes to fill (and a bit of a  deserted wasteland of an article), what should I have done to improve the text deleted partially for having "bad writing and grammar?"

Before seeing the format of the rest of the History pages, I'd have thought that there should at least be a section of information for things that happened before Season 1, and I honestly think that there should be! Maybe a change should be brought forward in having sections like "Before Season 1" or "During Rebellion" for characters where a lotta stuff happens before the show!

Originally, I thought any additions that made the [Pearl/History] article slightly less of a run-on stub could help improve it. TBH,  Pearl's history before Season 1 is quite important to an article  about  her history. (And personally, while I'm not a good writer, I'd say that the rest of the current article doesn't look or read that great either...)

Sorry about this trouble. Thanks so much for your suggestions and time, and I really appreciate your work on this Wiki!

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-Peace and love,

-infez  