Thread:Cheeseskates/@comment-29558690-20170210185308/@comment-5956954-20170210224014

It's alright. It was just not necessary. The issues I have with it is it uses words like "remarkable" in a fictional style instead of a documentation style where he writes as if the events are actually happening instead of writing them as events. The other issue was the grammar was fine as it was before, though they did fix the "gauntlets" mistake.

I would leave the edit, though I'll be making my own fixes. Thanks for letting me know.