Thread:MizukageMoonstone/@comment-4735347-20170531180532/@comment-4735347-20170531185354

I'm not sure the text I replaced was any better but here's a a revised version fir your consideration:

''Aquamarine had an innocuous first meeting with Steven while carrying out her mission on Earth to collect human specimens. It wasn't until their next encounter that things between them became antagonistic once Aquamarine revealed her true nature and intentions. Steven was was horrified to learn from her that he was inadvertently responsible for his friend's being in danger. Upon learning he was once Rose Quartz, Aquamarine accepted Stevens offer to take him to Homeworld instead of his friends.''