Thread:KinguvX/@comment-1871708-20160418231448/@comment-26450183-20160505122936

Ermagursh.. It is so good. But, the only thing I don't like is that Emerald is looking for beasts and happens to immidately see two beasts.. Maybe change it to something like Emerald has come specifally for those two, not that she just happens to see him.

One more thing, is it okay if I change Quartz's lines? I know it is YOUR story, but some of the Quartz lines don't really seem like her.

Sorry if any of this sounded rude, I really do like the story.

(one more question, are the beast form of Agate and Bloodstone just them shapeshifting?)