Talk:Stronger Than You/@comment-26838620-20151229053902

i wrote a parady of this for an animation i am working on and would like some critisicm and i also didnt know were to get it so i'm putting it here

 Stronger than you parody/ better then you

 This is Fang

 On the field

 Ready for battle

 And we’re never going to be beat by you

 Cause we’re so much better

 And everyone’s saying time to show them who’s the victor

 The two of us aren’t going to lose

 Especially to a pair of tools

 Let’s go two v two

 Let’s go us vs you

 Go ahead and try to beat us if you’re able

 Can’t you see that victory is off the table?

 We see you hate the way we fight

 But I think you just know you’re going down tonight

 You’re can’t beat us when we fight together

<p class="MsoNormal"> But you can try until forever.

<p class="MsoNormal"> If you beat us down

<p class="MsoNormal"> We’ll just comeback for another round

<p class="MsoNormal"> We are victory

<p class="MsoNormal"> Victory

<p class="MsoNormal"> Victory

<p class="MsoNormal"> Victory

<p class="MsoNormal"> This is who we are

<p class="MsoNormal"> This is our fight

<p class="MsoNormal"> And if you think you can beat us

<p class="MsoNormal"> Then you need to think again.

<p class="MsoNormal"> Cause we are family

<p class="MsoNormal"> And that’s a fact

<p class="MsoNormal"> We won’t let you take us down

<p class="MsoNormal"> We won’t be the ones beaten on the ground

<p class="MsoNormal"> Go ahead and try to beat us if you’re able

<p class="MsoNormal"> Can’t you see that victory is off the table?

<p class="MsoNormal"> You think you’ve seen what we can do

<p class="MsoNormal"> But we haven’t even shown you what we’re made of

<p class="MsoNormal"> We are more than just a team

<p class="MsoNormal"> We are every ones hopes and dreams

<p class="MsoNormal"> I am the power/ I am the strength

<p class="MsoNormal"> We are victorious

<p class="MsoNormal"> And we’re going to defeat you

thanks for any critiques or advice you can give in advance