Thread:The Most Interesting Nobody in the World/@comment-4220590-20150713001218/@comment-26285761-20150713002609

You are writing your opinions about his personality instead of writing about basic facts and events in his life, along with very few very strongly proven personality traits, with sources cited. Most of the time, when speaking of Greg's personality, write about events that imply it instead of the traits themselves. Basically, it was fine the way it was, and you didn't improve it, you deleted good things.