Thread:Agunachopace/@comment-28013077-20160229205136/@comment-25566471-20160603212118

Agunachopace wrote: Well, this is what I've been doing so far... Sorry if they kinda different from yours drawings... Oh.

OH.

NOW, POINTERS!

(I'm assuming you haven't drawn their gems yet.)

> Magnetite looks good, except the face is a screen and the hands are supposed to be like Peri's limb enhancers. Use this for the head bars.

> Lime Quartz's hair is supposed to be like Trump's hair. I'm going to assume that anything else that's different is not done, as opposed to you having missed it (i.e. the patterns on the pants and the wrong contrast for the boots).

> Corundum needs an entire SECTION.


 * The head is completely wrong, so I'll describe it to you: Bald, with a C-shaped visor, Robotnik (SA2) moustache, and a not-strange mouth (I'm not sure what you did there).


 * Admittedly, the head is sort of my fault - I put the eyebrows above the visor, and made a strange design on his head.

>The picture (the basis I gave you) isn't really the best quality, either - Hematite's in particular had really light lineart to begin with. You did an OUTSTANDING job so far with him, however, and there are just a couple things that irk me:


 * The eye that looked like it was closed is actually injured and stitched shut.


 * The star in the chest is actually his gem.

I'll include a new picture of everyone, too (I had to use my webcam again because my printer decided to capture the wrong stuff):